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Girl Who Doesn't Matter by ~CorkyBug:iconCorkyBug:



Lying motionless...
Face on the ground...
No blood flow...
The only way the blood is moving is out...
Out and onto the ground...
Who cares about this lifeless thing?
Who once had a good life...
Great friends and great boyfriend...
Who will miss this one creature God put on the Earth...
Set to die upon a hearth...
Blood pouring out...
From one single blow...
Blood pouring out in a constant flow...
Who will miss this girl...
In the end?


A hearth is the floor of a fireplace.
©2004-2009 ~CorkyBug
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umm...its about this girl, and she got hit by something and died..u gotta read it to understand..enjoy!

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:iconguardian-silver:
O_o; It's kinda of disturbing. In a way, but non the less I like it. :nod:

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:iconcorkybug:
thank u! i love poems..and im glad that i have the talent to write them..

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:iconkrytonite:
yay...but where is the picture of the subway napkin that you must write on so sloppely that you are the only person that can read it

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:iconcorkybug:
i dont go to subway so i wouldnt have that problem now would i?

SUBWAY IS NASTY!!!
:iconkrytonite:
subway is good....sometimes....but to go there every day would suck

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:iconkrytonite:
hmmmm......NAPKIN!!!!

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:iconluadcent:
well, this kinda was amusing.. Yes I'm back and into writing....just not as much as before keep up the work Lil C.

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November 19, 2004
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